IMO, here’s an author’s focused To Do list:
- “To be successful, we have to write good books quickly.”
- “Balanced writers are happy and productive writers.”
- The best marketing is “1) good book and 2) word of mouth.”
- Write with passion and emotion.
- Book purchases are emotionally driven.
- Books are a high-consideration purchase because of the TIME and FOCUS needed to read a book. (Hence #4 above, to write with passion/emotion.)
- Novel Diagnostics. Per Kristen, we start off our novel with our strength. Beware if it is any of these: a) info dump; fix with scene structure: goal -> conflict -> disaster; b) internalization; fix with conflict; c) flashback; fix with unique setting, authentic characters, captivating plot that unfolds in surprising ways, scads of conflict and more . . . “high human value,” high personal stakes as well as public stakes, plot layering and tension all the time.
- “Tension on every page” (per Donald Maass interview). “[W]hat tension means: In dialogue, it means disagreement. In action, it means not physical business but the inner anxiety of the point-of-view character. In exposition, it means ideas in conflict and emotions at war.”
- Villain/dark protagonist with humanity (per Donald Maass): Show “a small act of compassion, humor, self-awareness.”
- Per Donald Maass: “Micro-tension all the time is what keeps readers turning the pages to see what will happen.”
Now, I’m off to review Margie Lawson’s Deep EDITs (trademarked) system and finish reading Donald Maass’s Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook.
Denise Barker, author + freelance copy editor + blogger
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